The Elements Review: Linked Stories of Trauma

Twelve-year-old Freya spends time with her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she meets teenage twins. "The only thing better than knowing a secret," they advise her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the time that come after, they violate her, then inter her while living, combination of unease and frustration passing across their faces as they finally release her from her temporary coffin.

This could have served as the shocking focal point of a novel, but it's just one of numerous awful events in The Elements, which assembles four novelettes – released individually between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters navigate historical pain and try to achieve peace in the contemporary moment.

Disputed Context and Thematic Exploration

The book's release has been clouded by the addition of Earth, the second novella, on the preliminary list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, most other candidates withdrew in protest at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.

Debate of trans rights is absent from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of significant issues. Homophobia, the effect of conventional and digital platforms, caregiver abandonment and abuse are all examined.

Four Accounts of Suffering

  • In Water, a sorrowful woman named Willow transfers to a isolated Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for horrific crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a footballer on trial as an accomplice to rape.
  • In Fire, the adult Freya juggles revenge with her work as a medical professional.
  • In Air, a father flies to a burial with his adolescent son, and wonders how much to disclose about his family's past.
Trauma is piled on pain as wounded survivors seem doomed to encounter each other continuously for forever

Interconnected Narratives

Links proliferate. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to escape the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, collaborates with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one story reappear in cottages, taverns or legal settings in another.

These narrative elements may sound tangled, but the author is skilled at how to propel a narrative – his prior acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been converted into dozens languages. His direct prose bristles with gripping hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to toy with fire"; "the primary step I do when I arrive on the island is modify my name".

Personality Development and Storytelling Power

Characters are portrayed in succinct, powerful lines: the caring Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes echo with melancholy power or insightful humour: a boy is hit by his father after having an accident at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade insults over cups of diluted tea.

The author's talent of transporting you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the reappearance of a character or plot strand from an prior story a real thrill, for the initial several times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times almost comic: suffering is piled on suffering, chance on accident in a bleak farce in which wounded survivors seem doomed to meet each other repeatedly for forever.

Thematic Depth and Final Evaluation

If this sounds not exactly life and resembling purgatory, that is aspect of the author's thesis. These wounded people are burdened by the crimes they have endured, trapped in cycles of thought and behavior that churn and spiral and may in turn hurt others. The author has talked about the impact of his own experiences of mistreatment and he depicts with understanding the way his cast traverse this perilous landscape, extending for treatments – solitude, frigid water immersion, forgiveness or invigorating honesty – that might provide clarity.

The book's "elemental" concept isn't terribly instructive, while the rapid pace means the examination of sexual politics or digital platforms is primarily superficial. But while The Elements is a defective work, it's also a thoroughly readable, trauma-oriented epic: a valued riposte to the common obsession on investigators and perpetrators. The author illustrates how trauma can affect lives and generations, and how time and tenderness can soften its echoes.

Jose Mitchell
Jose Mitchell

A passionate storyteller and travel enthusiast dedicated to preserving life's fleeting moments through words and images.